May 16, 2010

The First Flight

This post is linked to Saturday Centus Week 2. A 100 word story based on a prompt. The prompt is in bold blockquotes below.


A call from air traffic control came in through the radio :
"Cleared For Takeoff"
"Ok, here we go, full throttle straight ahead"

The small Cessna 172 picked up speed as it roared down the runway, Sara at the controls, the flight instructor beside her, "get ready to climb, maintain 3,000 feet."

*Oh you sexy pilot * Sara thought . She had been using a flight simulator and was learning every aspect of aircraft control but this time she felt lighter. All she could see was heaven . Learning to fly was a dream come true and she was excited to have her instructor with her for the first time , whose company and conversations she knew she'd enjoy. She didn't mind him pushing the control buttons either.

14 comments:

  1. That was good many of us have made it romantic this week must be the weather !!! How come you put a pic in tut tut thats not allowed but hey it looks good thanks for visiting have a blessed Sunday

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  2. so romantic...inspiring...
    well done!
    Mine is here
    Happy Sunday!
    hugs
    shakira

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  3. God is my co-pilot?

    Thanks for dropping by to check out my meme. Sorry to say, it didn't end well.

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  4. Cheryl: I never thought of that!!? That would actually make a good story lol . God is my co-pilot- awesome :D Thanks for your input !

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  5. Tracy : I saw someone else do it :( I'll remove it if it offends everyone but I see no harm in putting a picture in there as long as it doesn't take the place of the essay .

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  6. Another clever positioning of the prompt! Suxch clever folk out there. I really enjoyed this - thank you!

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  7. I like how you put the prompt in the middle...and how the story goes. Good job!

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  8. Great job. I really like the prompt in the middle. Hope she got the guy ;-)

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  9. Nicely done, and very creative to put Mr. Jenny's words in the middle! Good work. I'm here if you feel like visiting.

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  10. Lot's of romance in the air! Love it.

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  11. Oo la la! Great take on this! :)

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  12. Wow, you guys are all fired up this week with this prompt! I think Mr. Jenny is going to be surprised when he reads them!

    Great twist with your words! What fun!

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